In class Critiques on "Neverything"

1. Over powering background noise
2. Dialogue is awkward and almost un-needed
3. Different Box
4. Work on length

In all We think most of these are excellent points. We decided that the sound and dialogue were distracting so we took it out, and upon watching it over was agreed there was improvement. We also spent a while working on the length of the movie, when we watched it in class we realized how long it really was, and cut the extra out (although it was nice to have that extra to hear the recommendations on what to cut and what to keep.) As for the different box, this is really the only point in which we don't really agree on, although it is a bit large, when we researched the different urns they were of all different sizes, and we actually quite like the box since it doesn't fit in with the house and because of its size, it creates more awkward tension when the character carries it that both of us really liked. While editing we also took out the scenes of the character glancing back at the box constantly upon recommendation of the class because it becomes redundant and also by taking it out we maintain more of the subtle nature needed for this piece.